So I tried to come back to this story again... It's got a ton of potential but you'll run into a weird problem in it.The author said that ability is limitless time and again in this story. But at chapter 47 the teacher basically tells him that his ability has reached its peak and that the only way to advance if through buying a better cultivation manual. This is complete and utter BS. If origin abilities had limitations then why do they matter? Isn't it better to max out the harder to master human body?So I was pretty upset and went to read other reviews where I discovered that the MC only upgrades his ability through those cards in the future.Really this isn't a terrible idea but its the way the author writes this story that gets on my nerves. Maybe this story is good in it's home language but the translation for this story is beyond terrible. Half the sentences that should have a depth of meaning are pretty blunt and straightforward.Take this sentence:No wonder, with only an E grade talent, you rushed all the way to 200 points. With such a degree of model analysis, I’m afraid that this ability has already reached its peak.So the author does things like this a lot. What's it mean to rush all the way to 200 points? Didn't he spend years refining his ability? This is a Professor who is basically considering his training "rushing". It's these types of sentences that show up all over the place. Things that are hard and require effort or talent are discarded like that.And this is the second thing. His ability has reached its peak? How so? I can think of a few dozen ways model analysis could be used combatively and other ways.1. analysis of Terran and input of instant defensive equipment.2. Analysis of Unknown monster and identification of weaknesses instantly3. Analysis of tracks made and infer the originator via saved models.and so on. He's clearly a tracking/brain type. The key is his ability has to be instant, unblockable, and allow him to fight while using it. What sucks is apparently origin abilities can be blocked. This is a total wth moment. How is a world which uses origin abilities to fight blocked so easily?My second beef with the story starts at chapter 52. We just came from a fight with a repeater. What's completely bizarre in this fight is that the MC with 300 fitness points doesn't easily overpower a guy with 110.This is pretty much the example of combat you'll see from beginning until now. This author does not understand combat.
Honestly what I love about this Novel is - character development.- An indept on each characters personality which brings the story alive.- A lot of reference to the Nigerian culture and way of life (which I just love 💕).
fast-paced developments and hot-blooded action=goodmany terms are lost in translation (CN to ENG)=readable but badarrogant MC, short-sighted MC (no long-term planning); hypocritical MC (*I don't kill womenz even the ones privy to my dad's murder bc reasons; takes in a stranger who brings trouble to his non-cultivator family and blames outsiders who have a feud with the stranger)needs more world-building MC focuses almost exclusively on revenge
1 star because the chapter is a scam, 3 chapters in here is only equivalent to only 1 chapter in the raw, so you are paying 3 times for a chapter in the raw
The story is good but the translation need editing. There are grammar errors every chapter making some sentences really hard to understand. The quality is better than MTL but the errors make it hard to really enjoy the story.I occasionally saw people commented in the chapters about the errors but so far non has been fixed
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