Married to the BOSS

This was a great Reid. I can’t wait for the next episode

non stop action with jaw dropping twists and turns and hot scenes to keep the blood pumping.

You need to shore up your grammar skills. You have a lot of missing commas, unnecessary addition of -ed, and wordy sentences. But considering you just started, it is okay. Add more sensory details; you say forest, but what about it? Your characters need more depth to them. What drives them? What weird quirks do they have? How do they deal with issues? etc...Keep writing and you will get better, just never give up!

Im back. Gonna read this again. What's up  |･ω･`)(〃 ω 〃)(/ω＼)(^///^)（*/∇＼*）ｷｬ(*´∀`*)えへへ（˶′◡‵˶）ﾟ.+:｡(〃ω〃)ﾟ.+:｡ ｷｬｧ♪(〃▽〃)ﾎﾟｯ(//∇//(//∇//(//∇//) ﾃﾚﾃﾚ(/∇＼*)…Reaaaally?･:*:･(*/////∇/////*)･:*:･Oh you~☆(*´∀｀)σ)))))*3ﾟ),･´.､(つω･*)o(〃・ω・〃)o・:*:・(●´Д｀●)・:*:・(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄( ͡°⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ⁄ʖ⁄ ⁄ ͡°)( ͡☉⁄ ⁄ ͜⁄ ͜ʖ̫⁄ ⁄ ͡☉)‧⁺( ᵒ̴̶̷̥́ ◡ ᵒ̴̶̷̣̥̀ )⁺‧(*ﾉωﾉ)ｷｬｰ(つ∀<●)ﾟ+.ｷｬｧ♪モジ(((ＵωＵ｀ *)(* ´ＵωＵ)))モジﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷ(ﾟ∀ﾟ*)(*ﾟ∀ﾟ)ﾄﾞｷﾄﾞｷもじ(´pq｀*)三(*´pq｀)もじ(∩ﾟ∀｀∩)ｷｬ―!!!!ｷｬｯ♪o((〃∇〃o))((o〃∇〃))oｷｬｯ♪

So the author has multiple notices up and there might be people who still complained about the issue of the story starting slow. So let me shed non spoiler light.Yes it starts slow. Yes some things that happen early make it seem like the MC forgot to do something. Everything gets explained. There are reasons. There's no plot holes if you read on. This author has spent a lot of time to make the characters seem real and to make a great world that flows together. I can't wait for this novel to progress so I can see where the journey leads to.Thank you to the author and anyone supporting them for this wonderful novel. I hope the quality stays as it is and that you, author, don't lose hope or interest in this novel.

I love where the story is heading and where it is currently. I would hate for the story to stop updating, that is just how good this novel is. Keep up the good work Pls dont quit the book

An interesting read to say the least, if you like stories with an OP MC, then this is the book for you. Sadly, it doesn't get any updated anymore.. It's still an amazing book nonetheless. :)

Ah, the title got me! When I saw the genre horror and thriller, I knew I had to read more. Nice work,  even from just a few chapters, I can tell it's a great work in progress. I really like it,  can't wait to read more!