Мне понравилось, очень интересно и классно, практически не видел таких фанфиков про попаданца с силой санс, продолжай в том же духе. ............................................
Liking the novel so far. The grammar is great I only spotted a few small mistakes. The author is great at world building, there are many questions that are slowly getting answered and I find myself looking forward to what is happening next a lot. There isn't much filler and the story keeps progressing at a steady pace so far. I definitely recommend this novel.
Honestly this is an amazing story that combines the cautiousness of a decent cultivator MC while not being too overbearing outwardly. I like the focus on physical similar to way of the devil but for an orginial minus the odd spacing and basic grammer errors its worth 5, 4 is only because its not professional quality and can be a bit of a info dump at times.
This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.
the first chapter of this novel was really good and before I knew it the mc starts to act like a clown, most of the the time he thinks outloud or the chatting with his enemies like the bandits the goblin. and for someone who couldn't socialize with people to change so drastically. honestly I only got problems with the mc he's to childish, when will he get seriuos?? is it when he loses someone important?? .wel the story it self isn't bad if guys want read it give it a try then.
Spectacular novel... the plot twist is mind juggling. The set up is unique as well.. it’s a fascinating novel. Will urge all to have a peek after the first chapter you would get hooked.
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