I have finished this novel y'all so the story goes well l until the first volume is finished and the progress is good,makes us look forward to the progress but then after that the author finishe's the novel quickly and the endings lackluster.
The author was new to this like having alot of subscription for the first time(he was a new author at the time) and when the subscription went down after a million words (I don't remember the exact number) All of a sudden he didn't know we to do and the story well ended quickly.So it's good for casual read but don't get too into it or you might rage at the ending.
isn't bad but the world changes for two months are so big that really don't make sense, and the more the history advances the lass sense this make, you will see some organizations and monsters that have a power level really op for the short period the time. The mc hack are really op but the world was so inconsistent that the hack was close to useless.
Note: Updating Stability and World Background will be set to 5 stars since this is a review made when it was still a trial read.
Writing Quality(4stars):
It's pretty decent, haven't a lot of problems with it
Story Development(4stars):
Pretty good, I like the idea. The MC's phone cheat isn't uncommon, but I like how it's done. The plot is basically him raising a pet store, hopefully it stays that way unlike other pet store novels.
Character Design(4stars):
Characters aren't paper cut-outs, well at least from what I've read.
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The author was new to this like having alot of subscription for the first time(he was a new author at the time) and when the subscription went down after a million words (I don't remember the exact number) All of a sudden he didn't know we to do and the story well ended quickly.So it's good for casual read but don't get too into it or you might rage at the ending.
Writing Quality(4stars):
It's pretty decent, haven't a lot of problems with it
Story Development(4stars):
Pretty good, I like the idea. The MC's phone cheat isn't uncommon, but I like how it's done. The plot is basically him raising a pet store, hopefully it stays that way unlike other pet store novels.
Character Design(4stars):
Characters aren't paper cut-outs, well at least from what I've read.
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