Makeout Tactics

It's a really neat and cute story, I I like how you arrange your sentences. It is easy to read in my opinion.

I feels that you can try to write more, I'm sure you will be a good writer.

Getting better chapters please I need support

Not sure why kakashi hatake likes it so much and did master Jeriah really write this if he did write it why doesn’t it say so also naruto could use this book and saskue also sai and probably choji


Where all my naruto fans at

Teenage awkwardness, just the way I like it.

Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over can't fix. Prose is good, and dialogue flows naturally. Might want to flesh out some of the single line dialogue IMO, just to give it a bit more spice.

Keep on writing, I want more of this.

Well I'm leaving a review on my own book ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
About 6 chapters left, I've written 3 I'll upload them soon. Thanks for sticking with me till the end ❤️

I'm very sorry that I took so long to update this book, it's my first time writing so be nice