Well written, the MC’s personality was realistic and we got to see some of his inner workings. Consistent logic, well as much as can be when magic is involved. It was a bit of a leap at the end though. But very, very hot. 10/10 as an evening read
This is definitely more intended to girls the mc is just a stupid loser who feels sorry for himself but does nothing when people step on him i dont know what his own father teached him. He sees his own wife cheat on him but he never thought about filming it and getting divorced now she divorced him and got half of him money even when mc gets the power to make every girl beg him to put it in he is thil steeped on by his boss even cries like a little baby this guy is not a real man. Im also extremely annoyed by his character he is the perfect guy to NTR even if he got that power to make any female beg him to put his dick inside of her. For any man to read this they will go crazy maybe females out there like man being losers and being dominated by every girl he meets if i was him i would find any rich company that has a female president and **** her then take over the company earnings while having her work also build a fucking harem. I just cant believe how the mc can be soo fucking stupid and a pussy.
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An excellent work of lust and love. Makes you think if having a power like Melvin had will be a boon or bane... It leaves a very good afterthought... Nice writing bro..
Character Design no al, 1-145 chapter in mc is still a much stupider simp. bottom of the world not al......................................................................................................................................................................................................
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