Magical Cosmic

The story had a very good start, there were some chapters which had me worried for the development of the stories, like in first town and casual day. I wont comment on grammar as i focus more on other aspects of story. the author already laid a groundwork for a good world so he should keep in mind of that. I would remind the author not to go in the direction of know it all and clever type MC without laying groundwork to make believe. If harem or romance then should have a good development like in some love at first sight. The villains and competitors should also not be some fools and should have some character.
The author should not be discouraged by some comments but rather strive to improve his quality, I believe this story has a chance for good development.

Its great so far should give it a try.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I read this up to chapter 23.

I think the author did a good job in writing this book. The quality is excellent, and the writing is neat, and everything flowed nicely. I can see that the author is a fan of sci-fi and did some homework as well.

Although it's still too early to tell about the story development, so far, the story is moving on nicely. It was not too rushed or too slow. I quite enjoy reading this novel.

Anyway, good luck, author.

Wow, after reading, I would definitely think that the writer was really a big fan of space novels. There were a lot of terms and jargon about space traveling, but these made it more enjoyable. It shows that the author researched his story. Overall, it was a good story. (BTW I've added it to my library)

Outer space novels can be a bit tasking for any writer. But, you are really doing a great job with it. The ML character is nicely done, the world is well thought out and the story line is progressing well. And, the writing quality is really good. Well done.

Damn, It was very good prologue.                                                                                                             ..