A novel with great potential, minimal grammatical mistakes, writing needs work, paragraphs need to be a bit shorter (1 and utmost 3 sentences often), the pace is too slow I think, 1 fight with a few bandits shouldn't take 5 chapters in my opinion, and it could have been done in chapter and utmost 3.
The story is starting off very interesting. I caught up with the latest chapter and I must say it isn't like those generic novels where the mc is all heroic, the mc of this story is very interesting and his character isn't for the soft-hearted. Overall I think this story will come a long way.
The story definitely has potential. The MC is very ruthless and meticulous _ something I really like rather than a softie hero-wanna be MC. He also kills and even does it with a smile. From what I can tell there is clearly a very dept history about his background. The writing quality also isn't very bad but can definitely be improved. The development of the story also seems to be going through a very good route. As for the world background it seems interesting enough but we are still only at the foot of the story, I hope this will become a very amazing novel and please, update more huhuhu, 2 times a day isn't enough for me anymore
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