Another system novel where MC intelligence shows author is either 5 years old or mentally handicapped. He sells things that are worth hundreds of gold for couple pieces of silver and yet everyone thinks he's such an amazing and cunning person while the rest of the novel is spent simping on every woman that comes across and acting like a dog despite being the son of the most powerful man in the entire region...
The problem is with the boring petty clichés, and the perverted petty character of the hero (Do the Chinese all think about girls and Lolita??!?), Doesn't force lead to domination, monopoly and occupation through cruelty, blood, and a cruel sword without mercy!? This is what we are looking for, real human characters, we don't want perverted Chinese characters and cartoons, I hope other readers will publish my comment in all the Chinese trivia novels, so that the officials can see them and make some changes, heroes of justice, bad guys, good guys, just childish words. We don't want such trivial words
This novel isstupid, Mc is dumb and character is dumb. Author is dumb, doesn’t know how go properly organize his plot. Hurt my head just reading it. Webnovel just manufacturIng novel now.
So many things done wrong that it's not even funny.
9 Chapters were all I could handle of this "literary masterpiece".
Generic antagonist whose sole purpose is to spout lines just to see what makes you cringe the hardest.
Generic pretty independent love interest who needs to be saved by MC at every turn despite being hailed as a great prodigy.
Generic Mentally handicapped MC who does not understand the world he is or what an economy of product is, Sells top quality products for pennies while complaining about how broke he is, Gets walked over by just about everyone in the novel, becomes a simp when interacting with a girls.
The idea of the book was quite interesting unfortunately execution leaves much to be desired.
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My expectations is pretty low for any trial novel on this platform nowadays.
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9 Chapters were all I could handle of this "literary masterpiece".
Generic antagonist whose sole purpose is to spout lines just to see what makes you cringe the hardest.
Generic pretty independent love interest who needs to be saved by MC at every turn despite being hailed as a great prodigy.
Generic Mentally handicapped MC who does not understand the world he is or what an economy of product is, Sells top quality products for pennies while complaining about how broke he is, Gets walked over by just about everyone in the novel, becomes a simp when interacting with a girls.
The idea of the book was quite interesting unfortunately execution leaves much to be desired.