A marvelous and applause for a great start! Martial Arts action novel is never really my thing but you broke that. Another action that will make the readers go crazy when reading this
This is an awesome modern world cultivation novel. Though its just four chapter, it is enough for us to realize to good this novel is going to be but this still depend on author's thought. I hope to read more and more chapters like this in future.
My story is nowhere near perfect. It can never reach that state. But if you are here for serious character development, weak to strong, romance, hardcore battles, then you have come to the right place.
Two volumes have been completed.
First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones.
Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development.
Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.
It was good for a while
Then I realised this is yet another worthless system novel
Why is the system plot so popular on this app
I genuinely hate system novel
I feel it just ruins everything fantasy or eastern fantasy stories are all about
btw It's just my personal opinion and not review for novel
two main problems.
First is the level of writing quality. English doesn't seems to be his native langue and even for me an french with a not that good level of English grammar, it sting my eyes...
The second one is the chaotic amount of techniques. He have so much bloodlines, cultivations techniques, talents at the same time.
When you mix both it's very difficult to understand and follow the story.
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Two volumes have been completed.
First Volume- Massive fillers and introductions, no major character development, unexpected pace, and some boring tones.
Second Volume- Sect development, character growth, rapid pace, tragedy, romance, some boring chapters, and proper story development.
Basically, this novel doesn't have many things that you would like. But if you are looking for a story that has a serious story plot and story development, with lots of ups and downs, then you can join Johnny on his journey to surpass his father so that no one can manipulate him ever again.
Then I realised this is yet another worthless system novel
Why is the system plot so popular on this app
I genuinely hate system novel
I feel it just ruins everything fantasy or eastern fantasy stories are all about
btw It's just my personal opinion and not review for novel
First is the level of writing quality. English doesn't seems to be his native langue and even for me an french with a not that good level of English grammar, it sting my eyes...
The second one is the chaotic amount of techniques. He have so much bloodlines, cultivations techniques, talents at the same time.
When you mix both it's very difficult to understand and follow the story.