Amazing story.
Only bad part is the grammar.
This takes a more rational and logical aproach compared to other “coming of age/hollywood” stories.
Mc is smart and funny.
The female leads have important roles in the story as well as complex personalities.
I recommend you give this a try.
The story was surprisingly good huh aside from some grammar mistakes overall is great I think the problem I see here in novel is only it's own title 'Made in America' (In my own opinion) it sounds like lame and nationalistic that's why those kids would skip reading it as they see it on the list maybe you could change it something like "Regressed as a Hollywood director" or "Regressed as a Greatest Hollywood director " something like that. that's all.
I actually don't know why Hollywood directors' story writers are so confident that their MCs will be trusted to directly direct films with big expenses.
Mc is a beginner, 18 years old, his first foray into the world of film and he asked to become a director.
no matter how good the story script the mc has, people in the film world will not believe it so easily.
It's good that the manuscript wasn't just taken, we all know how copyright works.
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Only bad part is the grammar.
This takes a more rational and logical aproach compared to other “coming of age/hollywood” stories.
Mc is smart and funny.
The female leads have important roles in the story as well as complex personalities.
I recommend you give this a try.
it can be improve with time.
(with proper editing and solving after grammar mistakes.)
I hope I can further improve my writing capabilities.
Thankyou
Mc is a beginner, 18 years old, his first foray into the world of film and he asked to become a director.
no matter how good the story script the mc has, people in the film world will not believe it so easily.
It's good that the manuscript wasn't just taken, we all know how copyright works.
Anyone found the source/raw