The synopsis is way too long. Cannot be bothered to read it. You should shorten it. The synopsis is way too long. Cannot be bothered to read it. You should shorten it. The synopsis is way too long. Cannot be bothered to read it. You should shorten it.
Please,where are the rest?I sincerely love the story and would like to know every detail of Lin Ming's astonishing journey.Just release the rest of the story for us mere mortals.
Homestly loved it, the MCU makes his own guns, its fot great description for the combat scenes, and the system isn't outright broken but he is still pretty powerful. Overall, great story and I hope foe its future continuation as a new fan.
Rating my own book 5 stars because I can. I am going to keep writing random stuff after I have already written my point just to make the word limit so that I can post this review
Writing this review after finishing the first volume (100 chapters).Positives:- Dark and gritty, with a mature writing style- Unpredictable - things don't always go the MC's way, or the way you're expecting- Refreshing - in a very oversaturated "system" genre, the author manages something very different - There is a decent balance of significant plot events and slice of life sections- The world grows with the MC, there aren't any overwhelming knowledge dumps - I personally enjoy the insight in the authors comments, demonstrating their thoughts, opinions and growth as an authorNegatives:- Can be confusing at times- As a weak MC, he spends a distressing amount of time injured- MC seems to lack any motivation outside of staying alive so far, spending most of his time following the whims of those stronger than him - hoping this will change at some point
i cant say that its slow start but its progressing really well. you easily get attached with tess. what made me read this is about the forbidden romance tag. lol. anyway. this is 3rd person pov so i like it. cant handle 1st person pov. keep it up.
The work is really good.All though there are grammatical errors but still i like the whole story and how its getting interesting with every chapter.And i really appreciate the hardwork of the author.Keep it up.
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