Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right?
I hope you guys like this novel, it's my second time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws.
Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing.
I hope you all have a wonderful day!
I like the story so far, it gives me SAO vibes. The only complaint I have for the story so far is in my opinion is a lack of buildup to the imprisionment in the game, But other then that, reading so far is very enjoyable and I would love to see more!
The author have the good descriptive of words, reading this remind me of my brother that likes to stream. Game streamers would relate to this. If you are into video games, give this a try!
i’ve already done with the 6 chapters and im kinda into it, the way you personas and character interacts and all its worth the read :) but for the action part you can improve it, and i know you can do it :)
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I hope you guys like this novel, it's my second time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws.
Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing.
I hope you all have a wonderful day!
i’ve already done with the 6 chapters and im kinda into it, the way you personas and character interacts and all its worth the read :) but for the action part you can improve it, and i know you can do it :)
Overall Plot is so intriguing ✓
Fighting scenes are improving ✓
Letting the story more engaging✓
Read this so you won't regret it (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧