LWS: Liye's Legacy

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The limited vocabulary and multiple grammatical errors in each chapter detract from the novel (english translation?). As well, the story is a bit plodding and pedantic at first, failing to draw you in to read more.
The MC is simple, mildly interesting and inquisitive, but his mode of speech and mentality do not follow true to his background. He behaves in a manner against his established background and character constantly, constantly changing from naive to knowledgeable, uneducated to intellectual.
The world was already well developed as this is a prequel to an existing world, anf the writer updates regularly. the story plotline seems interesting enough, but the mediocre writing quality and poor character development/consistency detract from the novel.

great prequel. can also be read as standalone novel. love the LWS world And hope for more.
great prequel. can also be read as standalone novel. love the LWS world And hope for more.

Everything is just so good. I just catch up with the latest chapter in one night without a wink of sleep. I even pay with coin. This is the first time I buy coins. It is that good. Totally recommended!!! Still a lot of mystery here, make me very curious. This is also the prequel of Last Wish System, the first contracted webnovel. TBH I haven't read that yet. I think I will be reading them now while waiting for this novel to update HAHAHA

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