I really liked the beginning. The sequence of events is also good, but your story has many dangers, but I am confident that you will not fall into it. I loved the character of Lowell very much and how he wrote it. Good luck, buddy.
Wow! This novel will be enticing, the abstract is quite fascinating.The author has done a good job here. From the words used in the story, I think the story is suitable for everyone to read
Hi, hello. Like every other person I came in the review section to review this. I am not going to get into the story I will just tell you how I feel, and it is upto you guys to read this or not.I came here reading that review of that pixel art pfp dude and read like all the 6 chaps. Plot is cliche and not to my taste. I mean it is generic, 'I got stuck in the game and now I have to get stronger to save the world.' I maybe had missed, but I haven't seen any grammar mistakes till now and the writing is good but character dressing and their expression aren't give importance much and so does the background.But it is decent till now with the slow pacing... (My opinion btw. if this doesn't remain decent or will get better like the pixel pfp guy has said, I will drop ts.)
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