Lunaris Interface Prototype System

i liked the start of the story really unique and well written it got my attention.....as for the system its really well planned out  which is really good.

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Hello all, I hope you enjoy this story, I wanted to write it because i thought it would be fun, and I always had a bit of a fascination with shapeshifters after playing them in some tabletop games. So I thought I’d try my hand at writing one such story. And mix in a little bit of shape shifting to other genders, and let hillariousness ensue. Now I don’t intend to force such things, as that just cheapens the comedic value of that. But do expect some humorous shenanigans to possibly come up

Superb voice and writing style. Right off the bat I am entangled in the story as it sweeps me from one scene and into the next. The main protagonist is wonderfully well-thought out and developed in a realistic way. I enjoyed his inner monologues the most. :)

I am not very familiar with sci-fi writing but this book has definitely got me interested in what is to come. I am looking forward to delving more into this creatively original story the author has crafted.

The novel is just regular in the first two chapters and then bam! The action starts, everything is good and am really hooked but if i may suggest, i'd like to author to cut down the paragraphs a bit.

Hello and an honest review from me. When I read your story, so far it has good writing but the paragraphs were too long so I might suggest if you could try to break it. Other than that, good job author

The great setting I read up to the latest chapter and the grammar was good and the synopsis elaborates on what is to be expected on theis story. Overall great story❤

I liked the rhythm of experiencing, everything in writing.
The reader revives in his own imagination and idealizes having that adventure. And do that role play, between intrigue, romance and virtual conquest with a pass to face-to-face dates...
I got hooked on the story and I saw myself, like a fan above: watching the show while going around a thousand times...
I will miss the long paragraphs of this novel.