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And like that Mesa made the Susanoo grab Xiao Zaihe and slowly started to crush him with the sounds of his bones being broken and his screams of agony ringing through the forest. After breaking nearly all of his bones, Mesa brought Xiao Zaihe down to eye level. Looking at Xiao Zaihe, his face was covered in blood pouring out of his nose, mouth ears and even his eyes. His body was crushed until it was nearly as thin as a noodle, but Xiao Zaihe was still not dead, he was just barely breathing and conscious.

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This is honestly great even if it has 8 episodes the story development is pretty and for your first time making a web novel you pretty valid

good writing, background, narrating storyline, logic are good thx