LOVE MY DADDY

need water

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Utterly horrible English. Characters change gender at a whim, story doesn't flow. random emojis are used. could be a great story. does not do world building well.

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After re sending the chapters will you be adding to the story as well or just re doing the chapters?

needed a story with this concept I can get behind it .            .              .                  .            .        .                 .

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Writing quality: 4/5 star

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