Okay!!!! Even though i've only read the first eight chapters, i'm already hooked. The idea behind the actual story is amazing and so original!! Don't think i've ever heard of a mafian/italian ghoststory before, lol! And Santo, omg don't even get me started on him! He's such a fun and different character, and i really feel like i actually know him, as i read the pages, which only shows just how amazing and talented the author is!
I can't say this enough, i'll recommend this book to everyone! It's absolutely amazing! Can't wait to read the rest <3 <3
The author's writing style is very entrancing as the MC is somewhat talking directly to the reader (or at least it's conveyed that way). It makes me feel like I'm in the setting with them, which a lot of authors fail to do. In terms of writing, their sentence structure could use some work, but it seems more like a language gap issue and it really isn't a problem.
The dialogue is very riveting and it doesn't allow me to stop. Knowing what all the characters are thinking and doing is so gratifying!
This is an excellent start and I can't wait to see where this is heading. Awesome job, Author-sama!
This is a gem; the author has done a good job presenting this story to us, giving us a smooth reading experience.
Clarifying that, the story is easy to digest, making for a clear and concise reading experience that doesn't leave you scratching your head out of frustration like some other stories do.
There are a plethora of characters, diverse and leaving a lot of room for favorites to be picked.
It's a setting I don't see explored much with stories on this site, so its refreshing to see--give this one a read.
I've read the first 10 chapters and I already got hook! Some of the chapters made me laugh. This made me enjoy. Loving every bit of the story and I'll definitely finish this masterpiece!!
I am surprised with your talent and writing skill I don't usually read these types of books but by taking a chance I must commend the author for writing this book and also I rate all 5 star........ To the best I could tell by the chapters that you are one out of a million best author in the world I must say you deserve all the best in the future and that wish are coming from myself Vanessa dowlatram keep it up
L'amore e l'inganno sono perfetti e anche se l'autore ha un'ampia comprensione dell'italiano, ci sono alcuni confusi con la fantasia. Ma la storia è molto bella. Buon lavoro
Overall, good job!
I found your book through another book i'm reading (the forbidden fruit), where the author referred to you - so i just had to see what that was all about, lol.
I've read about 5 chapters, and i love it so far! I just wanted to let you know!
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I can't say this enough, i'll recommend this book to everyone! It's absolutely amazing! Can't wait to read the rest <3 <3
The dialogue is very riveting and it doesn't allow me to stop. Knowing what all the characters are thinking and doing is so gratifying!
This is an excellent start and I can't wait to see where this is heading. Awesome job, Author-sama!
Clarifying that, the story is easy to digest, making for a clear and concise reading experience that doesn't leave you scratching your head out of frustration like some other stories do.
There are a plethora of characters, diverse and leaving a lot of room for favorites to be picked.
It's a setting I don't see explored much with stories on this site, so its refreshing to see--give this one a read.
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Overall, good job!
I've read about 5 chapters, and i love it so far! I just wanted to let you know!
Amazing job