Lost Souls' Rendezvous [Will be republished]

Going off the first few chapters, this is top notch. Well done. The writing is great, the grammar is solid, the description is legitimate, and it is a smooth yet easy read. Well done author, I feel like I am experiencing a new universe when I am reading this.

Stunning writing. You pulled me in with the first chapter. I love how you make the story flow. It's like a smooth wave of the sea unlike the crashing waves where Marcus and Ayesha first met by the cliff. This is a lovely novel to start til finish.

Though minor edits need to be done. And I haven't fully grasped yet the entirety of the setting. But, Marcus is a wonderful highly reflective young man while Ayesha appears to be a sweet charming young lady.

This is an amazing book. That's it, end of review




no but seriously, this book in incrdible. ayesha's character is no nice, it's not relateable. However how marcus reacts to thingd, is how I would.  almost to the dot. It's incredible!


The world building a descriptiond are absolutely my fav part. The scenic description at the begining is literally amazing, and then as it goes on, the sutle yet needed descriptions aren't too wordy, nor to basic.

i love this book!

I read a couple of chapters and I'm completely entranced by your writing style. The imagery is just *chefs kiss* It almost feels like I'm IN the book, experiencing everything Marco is going through. Great work author, definitely looking forward to future updates!!

Wow

This definitely needs a five star review! After reading the first chapter, i just couldn't stop until I've reached the last. The male lead can maneuver us from scene to scene through his thoughts! The writing is amazing and just * Chef's kiss*. The plot line is captivating. I have way many theories on what may happen the next chapter. Can't wait! Excellent work, you're a great author and keep going on!

I loved how the story was well paced and smooth. The description of the character and their emotions was well done. The explanation was vivid, relatable and also the words were efficient to imagine the situation.
It is relatable and wonderful plot!!

This story progresses well, the only flaw which, I would say, needs improving was the author's writing quality.
The author highlights the narrative with the use of many adjectives, this, in itself is fine, however these adjectives have not been used to their full capacity which in turn makes the read slightly cliche and annoying. This is aided with the use of 'pointing out the obvious'. For example, "it was a scene almost everyone had gotten used to as it happens quite often" - the reader already knows that it happening frequently is how everyone had gotten used to it, there is no need to clarify. The constant clarification and not leaving things to the reader's imagination takes the enjoyment and thrill out of reading such works of art, and thus makes them bored; and for the author, it is harder for them to create dramatic twists and turns in their plot. I would also suggest to go back and read through the grammar again to spot the small errors which need refining.
I am aware that this may be a lot to take in for the author, and I do apologise if it is. The writing and plot were well, the author has potential, so please do not be disheartended, there were only very small corrections which need to be made.