A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
Really great job!! The author created a really good story and character, a big world where we learn with the MC without being overwelmed with too many info. And what I really like is that he was able to avoid every cliché without making it forced, everything is really fluid and natural. Still early but I really hope that this work will have the success it deserves.
This book as had me hooked since I started reading it. The perfect blend of character development action and backstory. An amazing read from start to finish. In my opinion it should be officially published and promptly turned in to a movie in the future.
Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments
The Good: A good xianxia without any useless fluff for the most part. Author puts in plenty of effort to keep the quality high and it shows!
The Bad: The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive. A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with. I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense.
The Neutral: While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels. (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)
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The Bad: The cultivation levels are very hard to follow, I personally don't like it when I have to take a mental note of the levels because they are not intuitive. A slow pace is good, but going too slow makes it a chore to keep up with. I personally don't feel anything unique from the MC or the world, I feel like a plain character was placed in a generic xianxia world instead of building the world around the character. Sorry if that doesn't make much sense.
The Neutral: While this novel doesn't try anything new, I feel like the author is aware of that and plays to its strengths making it a very solid novel amongst a sea of cultivation novels. (Although the cultivation novel sea is many times smaller than the romance novel sea)