This novel started off so so so well, I mean I loved it after reading the first few chapters.....but everything pretty much went down hill from there, the story is based in an amazing world which I think is so cool and I have no problems with it but I just HATE the MC, he takes righteousness to a whole new level and it got soooooooo annoying, he was supposed 30 years old before he reincarnated but he doesn't seem to use any of the experience, aside from him being slightly perceptive there is absolute NOTHING ELSE uggggghhhhhh but aside from me hating the mc the story is great.
This novel is absolutely fantastic with a total of 3k chapters. So far I have read till 1.8k chapters and am still hooked. Its not just about martial arts but how the martial arts system is constantly refined to become better. Only issue is the machine translation which makes it difficult to read.Is there a way where random people can edit the chapters that are translated with machine?
I guess the humor just isn't for me, obviously the main character is meant to be dumb like a lot of other comedy novels but he is separately really unlikable and whiny. I guess this genre is about seeing him as pitiful but still being able to laugh because he's succeeding but i just can't get over how annoying his outlook on things and thought process is. I have come back to it 2-3 times to read more but i always end up stopping after a couple chapters because of how much time we have to spend with this guy that lazes around doing nothing, can't look at anything positively, seeks to use everyone around him, has no interpersonal relations, and is really really dumb. Not only that but the reality of the system setting the bar higher each time, which is the core of the comedy, to me reflects the depressing reality of struggling with a futile task and is genuinely depressing. There was a moment one chapter where he got the results in and it mentioned he felt suicidal; fair enough looking at the money you didn't get for free i think most people would be genuinely suicidal. I almost expected him to jump off the roof. On one hand he's still just being handed money but on the other he's going to have to work harder and harder and nothing goes right for him and its honestly kinda nightmarish. Anyway, i'm sure if you're a fan of this type of comedy the novel is great but it's a hard pass from me
Author shows an improvement as he progresses through the chapters. Something on my mind would be in the latest chapter, the partnership that forms between N and A. It reminds me a little of two thieves plotting a grand heist before it all happens. The image of partnership comes across clearly but there seems to be something off about it. All the best, yeah!
I'll be real, the story premise is really good. The only problems are constant change of POV, OOP flashbacks and redundant POV. If I describe this novel, it's like holding a bunch of strings with varying lengths with POV attached to the end and dragged onwards to create a story...
I enjoy this writer. His stability of updating is very regular! I don’t have to wait days for the next chapters! This start to this book has made me enjoy reading again! Amazing!
August 6: She's a genius, she invited me to this place (not allowed to write the name) and the entrance was so scarry but worth it. We were noticed by the guards but they let us in. The place is.... enchanting....
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