Lone Cultivator in Another World

New author who could use a little bit of work on his English at times, but that being said it's better than 99% of the stuff on this site already!

The majority of the time the author follows a logical progression, and shows the motivations for the characters actions in a way that makes sense and is engaging.

I think this author has a lot of potential, and if he had a professional editor on hand this novel would be almost publishable!

Keep on writing, keep on practicing, keep on doing your thing!

As a piece of advice, you might want to start distancing yourself from readers comments. As your novel gets more and more popular you will eventually attract some trolls, and some very loud negative voices from idiots who don't know what a proper story is, and couldn't write one to save their lives. Make sure not to let them discourage you!

I love this book it is addictive and interesting and is super underaited I recommend this to anyone looking for something unique or addictive I hope the author does not dropp this or get bored of writing this the author could add in new things to make it less borring like him conquering planets with his powers or with the help of others or another idea is adding kingdom building elements or going to fictional worlds or sci-fi worlds I hope the author adds in those things and I hope the author makes a 1000+ chapters

This is a pretty well written and enjoyable book.
I’ve read several “system” novels and this one is probably in my top 5 just because of the realistic dialogue between the protagonist and the system.
There’s a little bit of questionable character development regarding certain side characters but nothing that takes away from the content.

Author also does well with handling properly given criticism and communicates well at the moment. (10/2/18)
Will update if necessary.

The novel is very good :3.

It's really well thought out and written, the pacing for each chapter is nice and it's not a info dump like some novels with a system.
I wish you luck and hope you update stably.

I am enjoying this novel so far and recommend you continue, Thank You!!! Since I need more characters to post I would like to add that "I like my women the way I like my coffee, bitter(I don't care what color the woman is) and black with a hint of sweetness.