The plot had potential, but it was written pretty badly. They don't elaborate at all, and it skips around a lot. I got confused a lot. Characters were brought into the story randomly, so they had no background. The world background was confusing as well, because it started with the zombie apocalypse, but after a while, she was a demon and there were no zombies.
This novel had a lot of potential when it started out. Unfortunately the author seems to have gotten bored early in and do the concept fell into random chapters of disconnected story arcs for no apparent reason. Left one with a feeling of the whole thing being extremely forced. Lacks proper planning and development needed to hold an audience.
Good writing quality and stuff but it feels rushed and the author doesn’t seem where the story is going it goes from apocalyptic world into sudden mythology based modern earth with little to no explanation
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