I like all the stories that you have written so far and that is also the case for this one, I find that this beginning is very effective, fast and puts the reader in the mood of the story instantly. The story seems to have themes such as horror and mystery that I like and are well transcribed. Plus as usual a neutral evil mc and I really like that. I wish you good luck author for the future, your stories are very interesting and I will continue to read them with pleasure.
The first two chapters were quite wired but it was a good hook technique, the chapter is quite too long but it is fun to read please keep doing good work!
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