I am shocked I managed to read 30 chapters of this..Honestly, like someone else said, the concept was interesting, but at least for me the execution fell flat. I gave up when the dog ate his pills. A cultivator losing to a dog is just to stupid.
I will follow this author anywhere, though there's not much to say about this story as it's only 3 chapters in. however I just hope he completes this one and stops teasing
Story is good, i think chapter 11 is just like overlord right? And the characters are not really explained how they look exactly. It's kinda hard to imagine how they look like, i think you should explain them a little more detailed like for ex. Red long hair in a ponytail with white pale skin and a niceor sexy curve body with fierce personality. Something like like that, well i kinda like the story it's getting more interesting, also i wish the update gets stable. Hahaha just stating that comes to my mind so i could write something.
great story with an amazing cliff hanger at the end. no major issues just a couple of occasions when either the characters gender or name would be a wrong
"You didn't want me to come? But it's the new year." Gan Tian Chi asks, seeming hurt by the fact that she did not want to come. He sees the two men who were rendered unconscious, and out of curiosity bends over to check on them.
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