Life Dealer System

  • Genre: Realistic
  • Author: KoFu_
  • Status: Ongoing

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  1. Rachel Adam
    Rachel Adam rated it
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    Seem like this is one  dropped.. have been waiting for quite a long time.. thought I have added it on my library. there is no updates. Really sad to see this one is over as well.
  1. Xaviera Arthur
    Xaviera Arthur rated it
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    Author reporting for duty !

    I made this realistic novel since I need a break of the fantasy novel I'm currently writing (Half-Giant Time Traveller).

    Read the description to know more about the novel.

    Anyway I write this for fun in my spare time. If you have a suggestion please write a constructive one.

    That is more appreciated than any cheer/hate review. Anything to make me a better author is appreciated.

    Cheers and enjoy!
  1. Leif Cocker
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    Uhh has the novel been canceled? because we'd very much like some more... the grammar quality doesn't matter as much anymore as i'm now a definite fan and i'm starting to miss reading this...
  1. Newman Armstrong
    Newman Armstrong rated it
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    This novel has a good concept and plot (I think it might have). The only problems are the constant errors. Not grammatic errors but text error where some paragraphs don't make sense due to the wording.

    Author, I have tip that you can use while editing your chapters.
    First write your chapter and then wait at least 30 min before editing your chapter. Before you wait the chapter ia still fresh in your head so everything makes sense for you. But after you wait you see the things you could have done better.

    This is why editors are so great. But I assume you can't get an editor so just follow the tip above and you'll be most likely off better.
    Ps. I got this tip from a experienced author, but I was too lazy to implement this into my novel, although I probably will do it.
  1. Blithe Child
    Blithe Child rated it
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    chapter one
    what does a lightning strike victim need surgery for?
    ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
  1. Felix Davy
    Felix Davy rated it
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    It doesn't have a deep character development and it's fast paced but nonetheless I liked it in it's own way so keep the good work.

    And work on your English more you need that.
  1. Roxanne Bloomfield
    Roxanne Bloomfield rated it
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    great book, bad grammar, but i understand and im starting to get hooked so is it possible to know when the update will be?
    currently looking for a good novel genre like this one and life merchant, if anyone knows any please let me know haha

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