BTW, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! When you buy the chapters, please just buy chapters with title only. If there's no title, please don't buy, not yet because its only a sneak peek and not complete. Please be patient and I do hope you enjoy this story. I won't drag it too much, no worries about that.
I really liked the description. I think the author did an excellent job in describing the scenes and all.Highly recommend!!Great job author!!!ππππ
For a reference I read what was free. The grammar is ok with minor errors here and there. The story hasnβt really taken off for me yet but it is progressing slowly. In the free chapters the class system isnβt really explored by the MC. He has no skills or abilities yet either. He also hasnβt used the dagger he found even though he is aware it is special, where is the gamers curiosity? He also took a while to use his SP after lvling up. The readers also get a hint about vampires and the other country having them in the real world but nothing else about the stories main story line. The MC also doesnβt seem to have anything special about him or unique to make him stand out yet. I do like how he killled NPCs to lvl up like a true assassin. Also I would stop repeating your last chapter in the next one even if it doesnβt effect the cost readers will interpret it as doing so. Hope your story does good in the future.
Cara looked down on the mountains below and frowned. Scattered throughout the scenery were splotches of black and brown, where no flora grew. She grumbled to herself at the destruction the unregulated pollution was causing, and she didn't want to see it continued. The further south she looked the worse the damage became, while the north seemed aglow with vibrant greenery.
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