The story jumps and skips around randomly. In the middle of things it always, ALWAYS, jumps away so that nothing ever feels satisfying. This is exactly the worst way to write a book. The MC, meanwhile, is a total beta. He's the kind of guy that would watch his girlfriend get f*cked because somebody asked him politely. He's led around by the nose by the author. The greatest proof that he's just a follower is that he is constantly getting bullied by the author to go here or do that without any rhyme or reason, and he does it even though his own character should have chosen something else. That's the problem. Never once does this character make a judgement that he would have made on his own and stuck with it. He's just the authors puppet.
hey author and new readers seeking to read this novel, I ll give you a pros and cons of the novel.
pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent.
to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes.
2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting.
3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble.
4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype.
cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow.
2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself.
3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.
At first, the book was quite mediocre. I didn’t think much of it and expected nothing special. HOWEVER, after about 100 chapters, the story picked up and I was utterly enthralled. I couldn’t keep my nose out of this beautiful piece of art. There are some mistakes throughout, but all of its good qualities far outweigh any inconvenience a reader comes across. Seeing everything come together and trying to guess what the protagonist is thinking is incredibly exhilarating.
I can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it up Author. Bless you and your beautiful mind.
I enjoy reading honestly reviews and I think I should provide one. as of chapter 30, the MC is given an amazing ability and is coming from a place of no ability in a world of super powers. what does he do? does he plan, learn, and be cautious while growing stronger? no, he is greedy and only survives due to luck and plot armour. it is disappointing seeing how the mc can be aware of his fragility and still rush into death like an idiot. I dislike seeing the other perspectives and even skip them because I don't care about these other individuals. it is a good story compared to a lot of other garbage on here but no where near flawless.
The author is reviewing himself, I know it's biased but one review wouldn't hurt. Plus, I'm here to give you an extra overview of the novel. English is not my first language, and I would like to apologize for any mistakes you might see. I have been writing this for almost a month, and there (currently) 47 chapters, so you can see the stability of the updates. I try to update once a day and would update more if this novel gets the top rankings (hopefully, fingers crossed).
I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what.
As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line.
The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats).
I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!
Hello. Author is here again with another review. I think there are more than 180 chapters right now, so I thought more people need to see this. Read the first review to understand the gist of my novel.
I admit that the first volume, that is 52 chapters, is not as ideal as it can be. Some people mentioned that vagueness of the novel, but there's a mystery tag so you'd have to stick around to understand everything this novel is about.
Others mentioned plot-armor, which I find not as overused as they think. There are many things that are a foreshadowing for later events and everything would be linked together. Anyone who read until the latest chapters knows that some of those events happened for a reason the MC didn't know about.
There's some change in POVs that happened early on, but would get very rare later. Please understand. Thank you.
I just wanted to clairfy this so that you, whoever is interested, to give this novel a chance to prove itself.
The MC is the type of character that falls directly into my "move on to next novel" territory. My score is unfortunately based on my experience of having just read Solo Levelling & Rise of a Porter and I really enjoyed them. I commend the hard work but the moments where something pivotal is about to happen so it immediately cuts to a different scene and the slow pace was very jarring so I only made it to chapter 23. I'm the type of person where if nothing has grabbed my attention and I'm up to chapter 20? It's definitely a no
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pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent.
to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes.
2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting.
3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble.
4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype.
cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow.
2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself.
3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.
I can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep it up Author. Bless you and your beautiful mind.
I spent most of my time on the character design and giving them depth, while also minding the originality of my novel. I don't know if I'm going the right path, but I wish you enjoy this journey no matter what.
As a summary of the world, it's an age of modern magic. There are dungeons but there also magic gunmen, flying ships, and other feats of magic technology. The world is filled with dungeons and hidden dangers, and the purpose of them would be explained later down the line.
The unique thing about my novel is legacies. They are contracts that transcend time and space between two people, one alive and one dead. The dead ones of the past leave a part of their will (soul) and powers in return of asking for something. The protagonist isn't the only one who have this, many do. Our protagonist, however, has a young legacy that let's him increase his strength (stats).
I wrote this novel after reading many of this genre, hoping to make one that doesn't lack what others lacked, hoping for a new fun novel to emerge into the world. I'm still a newbie author, and I wish for everyone's guidance. Let's have fun together!
I admit that the first volume, that is 52 chapters, is not as ideal as it can be. Some people mentioned that vagueness of the novel, but there's a mystery tag so you'd have to stick around to understand everything this novel is about.
Others mentioned plot-armor, which I find not as overused as they think. There are many things that are a foreshadowing for later events and everything would be linked together. Anyone who read until the latest chapters knows that some of those events happened for a reason the MC didn't know about.
There's some change in POVs that happened early on, but would get very rare later. Please understand. Thank you.
I just wanted to clairfy this so that you, whoever is interested, to give this novel a chance to prove itself.