I think you should put his system as bestow skill and have some conection with certain god, like god of hunt or god of game maybe. Why? Because it will make it easy to accept where all item from gacha came from. And give some reason why he got that system. Why? Because everthing come for benefit, why would world give you a cheat if you cant give it more benefit.
love it! good characters and nicely paced. the characters are fun and interesting. Only complaint is not enough chapters! must read for all those that love BL. happy to have more Bl stories!
MUY BUENA HISTORIA,PUBLIQUEN MAS SEGUIDO POR FAVOR, OJALA QUE LA HISTORIA SIGA ESE RITMO Y TENGA UN BUEN FINAL Y QUE NO TENGA HAREM ESO YA ES MUY COMÚN
Though the novel’s grammar does get better the beginning chapters make no sense due to the horrendous grammar the character interactions are unrealistic and feel annoying to read after a while so overall this is a novel with a great premise but an author who doesn't edit or reread before posting causing the story to be subpar
the rating is after 60 chapters. The story had a bit potential, but writing quality is very bad. In the 60 chapters, nothing really happens, and whole chapters with lots of words are wasted in describing tiny details. A very bad writing quality.
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