Good story , Nice starting and also detailed but not too much information which is quite good. Well I want to say that it's enjoying but don't use too much cliche like love interests are kidnapped and threatened for being r*ped which is only thing I don't like. It decrease interest in story and let readers worry about girls which too cliche and unacceptable for me.
Well nice , keep it up
So far nice story with good pace. It carries a light tone and seems to move towards a good direction. Hopefully the author will keep up the good work let read another good story
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
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Well nice , keep it up
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author
Good story I look forward to the continuation of the story Dear author