I waited for such a long time, to have a good kdb novel, without a system but only the intelligence of the MC. I dare the author to stop writing, and my arm will extend to wherever the author is and strangle him, til he carries on.
Do people really like this? I read this and felt that everything that mc gained is cheap, super cheap. He got super powerful talent, then, he got super powerful pets from the beginning, then, he also gets help from super powerful people. It is too easy and cheap.
It is amazing how the writer was able to combine mystery, the supernatural and humanity. Awesome!!!!!!!!! It is a good read and I look forward to more from the author.
Lots of spelling, lexical and grammatical mistakes.. Sometimes it is hard to understand the meaning of the sentence, often misspelled he/she/his/hers, kind/king etc. A lot of repeatability, repeating words, repeatedly, saying the same again and again, then repeat it. Definitely needs an editor. Story development is something subjectively, it is a bit slow for my liking, but it is a good story and it could raise into something great, while character development is pretty good, yet not too fast or too deep, you can feel the characters and there is a lot of space left for their development. As for world background 45 chapters deep, I know almost nothing. It's some casual city [suggestion], guess it is something reader has to create while reading. As for stability of updates I have just started yesterday, seeing in early chapters in author notes saying (2 a day, then 10 a week, then 5 a week, 12,4,7,20,1... For god's sake couldn't it be juse when you have time even one a week would be enough if not announced 10 a week. Author (yes actually author) is writing 4-5 or maybe more idk. novels at the same time, not good enough quality even asking for donations under every single chapter. *I am quiting*. Please edit your plain texts, concentrate on one or two novels at a time, keep the good story and chapters, maybe add a single detail either on VR and real world and I will be more than happy to continue reading and donate.
I can't get enough of this book. It's quality writing and I LOVE the character development. I also have to appreciate how unique the whole concept is. It's not like anything I've read before and it need to know what happens next!
A nice story that gives me Hunger Games sort of vibes, but with otherworldly beings. What really made me enjoy what I've read so far is how the characters are designed. Distinct and unique personalities keep the momentum going, along with the already interesting plot in itself. A solid recommendation from me :)On a side note, the relationship between Silas and Saya is rather endearing, and I find it quite adorable~
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