Very interesting read. Well done author for a refreshing and original work! The author writes well and has great story telling skills. A great read overall.
This is a story about a poor delivery boy that got his lucky encounter and become a cultivator in modern society. Unfortunately, even though he gradually becomes rich he keeps going around in shabby clothes driving a 3wheel motorcycle, leading to repeated underestimations and face-slapping. It could be much better, but the author keeps repeating similar encounters and dialogues, thus becoming boring.
I am into 5 five chapter yet so disappointed 1. 55 min to c*m? that is too long most girls like to c*m at the same time as man 7-8 min author you could at least make it 15 min.2. just my personal judgement but that second guy's joke was decent enough why give him such biased opinion from girs??
Your writing quality is superb. I love the way you describe the characters. The fact that he has a debt to pay and that his debtor's sold him reminded me of how brutal some debtor's are. The synopsis is short, but straight to the point and I like that. Overall, a great job considering it's only 8 chapters. All the best, author!
Hey, everyone. Thank you for taking a look at my novel. As for many, this is my first attempt at writing, so I welcome constructive criticism.There will be many things - transmigration, a system with a small twist, earning money while trying to cultivate and navigate through school. I just have too many interests, but I believe I will be able to incorporate them all in a healthy way.There are two things I dislike in novels that first come to mind - meaningless nationalism and stupidly huge harems. I will try to address both. The school is, in fact, an international experimental school, and while I cannot refuse myself the pleasure of writing a harem novel, I will do my best to keep it romantic, realistic and not over-the-top. Also, this first chapter was just a test of site's functionality. Stable updates will start from August, 1.With that said, I shall shamelessly rate myself with 5 stars and invite you again to add Model Citizen to your library and take a look again in a few days!
I like how the story is shaping up. He has an OP attribute in the form of luck, which is quite unique. I can also see the improvements in your writing quality.The one thing I want to see is some kind of a rule around how his luck works. As far I have read, he doesn't seem to be lucky everywhere he goes. When does it activate? What are its limitations? Those are some of the things I would like to see.
So far, I am liking this story!(new reader)😃 10/10 low key hoping no major cliffhangers happen...(don't mind me)... Kinda just actually wanted to write a review😋 it's all good in my book 📖anyways! adios! I was never here!!🍃
Considering the updates... as far as I can see they're coming in consistently. But regarding the characters and the setting.. I feel like it's a copy of overlord. The magic, the mc, his attendants(the azaroth castle monsters) . It seems like the author was 'heavily' inspired from overlord. Azaroth is like Nazarick, his attendant Aurelle? I think her name was, is like Albedo and he himself resembles Ainz in some ways. Universe items, world items, magic tiers and stuff... so yea. Sorry if I offend you author, but this is my honest opinion... 😣
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