Good story. A little hurried along at points and at other it's quite slow. Try to get a steady pace for each chapter. Other than that it's a good story.
Wow, this is story is so cool. It's like a Dragon ball fan fiction but with original transformations, new characters and loads of other stuff. I love it, CAN'T WAIT!!
Well, this is a good start to a story but it's good to make sure you stick to your schedule. You owe us 3 chapters. Hopefully you're already in development
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
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