Legacy Of Pride

He woke up in a small room with a lot of white tools around him, in other worlds, he was lying in a hospital room, in his left side two of his school pupil were injured and unconscious.

Doctor: "well Mr Yuuichi, you should get some rest now"

1st mission: “Penalty for failure: Death”The story is great but the author really has no idea how to create tension. Every single character will be railroaded into a forced path and there will be no decission making, you will always know what will happen next. However it is at least an decently interesting path.Great story and concept. But the author just never leaves any possibility for alternate paths or ”what if” questions. Anything important was always going to happen the exact way it happened because the author only left one path for the story to continue.

Keep up the work, not bad for a first time😘

This is an engaging fantasy web novel that blends action, mystery, and reincarnation elements. With vivid world-building and compelling characters, it explores themes of power and redemption. Fans of epic battles and intricate storytelling will find it an exciting read with promising potential.Good job author—keep it up! 🙌