Not 100 yards away, she finds the 3 people one with a round piece of wood and a short skewer with a wooden handle, the second one with a piece of wood with which he shoots other wood and the last one has a long piece of wood and has golden sparks on the other 2 People fall down and call [Holy Light]. Whenever the human gets that, the sores and scratches of the other two people disappear.
That's my personal opinion so don't take offense.The writing quality is good. Some mistakes here and there but acceptable. The writing style seems a little bit weird as the author tries to make things sound very powerful: Divine that, Divine this. Some logic mistakes too, like those assassins. No one would send some weak chickens like this to assassinate an high ranking noble. Descriptions are too long. It leaves less room for imagination which I think is an essential part of reading. The fights also seem too slow because author writes too much detail.As I don't have that much information about the story it is unpredictable. But at first sight it seems like a standart continental war story with fantasy as foundation and some schemes in the background.Mc seems like a regular Isekai-Mc: Strong-willed with cheats.The world is a big fantasy world with many races. Powerlevels explained clearly.All in all its nothing really new, while every story is unique on its own. It has quite many logic errors.It may sound harsh but it's mostly because I have high standarts as I've already read so much and find many stories predictable.
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