Last Shelter Online

I rarely enjoy reading Game / System' novel. But this story' is an exception for me. It's beautifully writen, fast paced but not too fast, and the flow is balanced. I really enjoyed it. good job author, keep the good work!

Interesting start, very well done! Can't wait to read more chapters, keep up the very good work and all the very best for WSA 2022 hope you do well :)

This one give me fresh vibe to Gaming genre. Written beautifully with interesting plot and lot mysteries

Yeah, but anyway!

I need more Hiro x Liberty, she is just soo Cute!

Stopped reading around Chp 165

This book is pretty interesting. I was actually hooked for a little bit but there are some cons that really disrupt the experience for me.

The main thing is that the mysteries are a bit exasperating. The mysteries keep building at the worst times; some people may not mind this but i find it a bit annoying because it interupts my understanding of the MC and his emotions or gives me the impression that hes overly emotional or weak willed. Most of the time when the weird random stuff happen, he doesnt give it too much thought or tries to analyze things intricately. Personally, i just felt he could do a lot more.

Overall, your story premise is very good and entertaining. Ive been enjoying the story so far.

One thing i would like to add to improve the story is to make the MC more focused, analytical, relentless and less clueless in finding out what really happened to his brother. Lastly, you should tone down the mystery and randomness of the events or increase the time interval between them. We need more of the MMORPG feel and less of the Murder mystery feel.

Congratulations and keep up the good work, I always support you. The novel game this time is cool, it feels like we are playing the game ourselves, continue. level up.

I've never read a game novel before. But after finding this jewel, i can say the plot is very intriguing with interesting character.

Hiro is the first MC in male lead story that i liked!

So far so good.  The protagonist reminds me of the classic mc manga and anime.  I want to see how the protagonist develops further. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]