Great story the author has written other, however, I suggest long paragraphs when it comes to things like explaining the world background. Shorten paragraphs then I
the story will have no problem
Honestly? This was really good. The pace was just right, something that many authors struggled with. The story building, the build up, the cliff hangers, everything was well written out. I hope I get to see more chapters from this author again! Good work!
After reading till the latest (chapter 14) this I conclude that it was worth my time reading this. Although the author needs to nitpick some mishaps on the chaps. Slight edits will make it perfect. The Story was a mix of past and present scenes and also some scenes are portraying first-person narration and there are also some chaps with third-person narrations. Anyways, regardless they were enjoyable to read. The characters were round as he was not cardboard cutouts. Making mistakes were what makes this novel to spice up. Hope more chapters to come in the future. You got me hooked and invested. Hidden gem! Five stars!
This is some really great work. I really enjoyed reading it and I would 100% recommend it. One thing I want to add, some paragraphs are long, make them shorter.
Overall, it's amazing!
bruh why are there so many 5 star reviews the writing quality is terrible with loads of grammar and spelling mistakes. do people just spam 5 stars for anything that looks remotely English now?
This is good, I enjoying the story. Hopefully author is on good health and can continue but it is alright if you want to take a break. Anyway nice story man.
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the story will have no problem
Overall, it's amazing!