Compulsory Author Review :/Now that we’ve basically reached the end of Volume 1 Arc 2 (Chapter 23), I thought to write a review. Also use this comment section as Q&A if need be. The synopsis is pretty sh * t so I need to work on that. The story is one of character growth: MAIN CHARACTER:Here we have a fat, middle-aged dork who has to change his ways from becoming reclusive and not being anything to speak about, to becoming rich, charismatic, physically strong, and se * ually capable. It will take a while. From these first two arcs, I think I have presented how insufferably pathetic he can be, but also how much potential he has in the tank to become the 4 traits I mentioned earlier. His lowered moral inhibitions will also play a factor in propelling him (rather rapidly) to become an interesting individual and great MC.HAREM:My goal is to make the female characters as 3 dimensional as possible, while also making Samuel’s encounters and relationships with each as interesting as possible. I plan to cap the harem to about 8-12 women (including inc * stuous relationships). Flings and s * x friends may be considered once he is actually rich, but for now solid relationships is the way. Harem will be diverse and cater to many fetishes: M * LFs, V * rgins, Bullies, Twins, Bookworm and everyone’s mother lol. The whole lot. As highlighted in the synopsis, this story will also delve a lot into MC’s interactions with the world at large (AU Earth)… how he grows rich and the details of the process, as well as how he slowly becomes a ‘Chad’.SYSTEM:The non-sentient system is a complex tool at Samuel’s behest, that constantly grows and is honestly one of the most attractive features of the story I’ve written in my opinion. I can’t think of what else to mention here. If you have any questions, leave a comment and I’ll answer promptly. P.S: Please give my story until chapter 15-20 before considering if it’s worthy to continue reading. I am confident your impressions of the story will change many times over these initial chapters anyway. Happy reading.
Interesting. A novel with the MC as an NPC but with the player privileges. Also I find the game elements fun(interesting) to read.World development is good, giving the race distinction but my view on elves has changed to see, a deeper view to elves not being just archers.
Honestly the author gave up on this book and gave it a very abrupt ending witch was total garbage. If you want to read this be prepared for a very rushed and trash ending
Sig' accepted the request and was wrapped in light too, however when he looked above his head, there was only his name, his level and his title. So a mercenary group wasn't like a guild, it was good to know. Like this nobody will be able to guess he was a part of Morgana's group.
At a closer look for them both, just one man was a light tone of red for his skin, while the other was as pale as a ghost.. even his hair was ice white to the color, not even damaged by the ashes or soot, not even bloodied up.. just the flesh wounds of his chest puking up gushes of red blood like a river almost.
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