Klas

"Sorry." i said without using sir word.

Some parts of the story, are a bit lacking, but overall it was fun reading it! I see the potential of the few chapters but some parts need a lot of explaining, Like what are the Virals? Can they be scanned too?I like the dynamic with the main character and the potential partner(?) both of them are so ignorant of each others feelings that its creating even more misunderstanding.Came from reddit, you got something on your hand man or woman, I made this account for just this review. I might comeback when there’s 30+ chapters or more.

l love the book although l read a few chapters. l like shasha character the most

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Alright so I'll be honest this is a slow burn novel if you can't stand slow burns please do not read this I don't want to waste your time with a type of novel you dislike......If you have come all the way down here to know more all I can say is every character from everything I have posted is in the novel one way or another read chapter 0 if you are a lore person it will make sense later oh and also don't worry I won't drop or cut this short I have about 100 draft chapters which will only go over arc 1 and also also I do plan on implementing elements from other author's works you might realize and yes I do give full credit to them for coming up with those cool ideas.