Kiss My Ice

I was reading this as a favor to the author but I must say I am incredibly impressed. The use of vivid imagery combined with just right amount of action keeps my interest throughout the entire prologue. I am curious to see this Ojero and what he us all about. But still, so far I am very impressed with his story telling and world building abilities. Well done. Just one critique, what does Lazarus look like?

The story (upto ch 17) is very captivating, with little to no grammatical errors and competently written.The story flows well, so does the action, the worldbuilding is intriguing but could be explained a bit more, for eg. the different Realms where the gods reside and where they end up during the story. The names of the Gods and their respective domains and the supporting characters may be a bit tough to remember at first but it became easier as the story went onMy only real complaint is the relatively slow update schedule but all in all its a very good first book from the author and I'd highly recommend to future readers