Kingdom Building : Horizon of War

  • Genre: Fantasy
  • Author: NETNIAHO
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.6 / 5.0, 27 votes)
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  1. Mhayxxi
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    Mc migrates to a world dominated by women and is supposedly the 'villain'. Once he gets the system, he acts extremely spineless and without dignity.πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“The way he uses the system and his pacifist attitude is so disgusting that it made me want to vomit while reading. He doesn't want to get involved with the so-called protagonist, he wants a technically peaceful life. And in order to protect this so-called peaceful and valuable life, he doesn't hesitate to act like a woman.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚It's frankly amazing that a person who has lived as a man for years in the world can be so transgender. The original protagonist (that universe) is more of a man. πŸ€”In short, if you like reading about a spineless, cowardly, peaceful and feminine (acting) Mc, you might love this novel. For me it was just disgusting and annoying.πŸ‘ŽπŸ»
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  1. ASH17writes
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    Abusive racism starts at chapter 18. Those who don't like chinese racist content and people from countries like Japan and America beware .................................
  1. KingofDezzNuts
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    I will touch a few aspects of the novel:First comes story development - While some people prefer to see quick power up boosts, I appreciate the slow development of the story. I firmly believe MC needs time to develop even if he is a genius - it makes no sense if he suddenly becomes the strongest in the world.Second comes romance - From the former novel of the author I believe he is against useless harems with countless useless and weak wives everywhere. However, in 60 chapters only, MC already has "collected" 2 wives, making me wonder if it's a harem system instead of a villain one. Hopefully, author won't turn it into another generic harem novel, where every woman is completely useless and barely gets story time after he conquers her. As MC should already know about all outstanding women in advance (if I got it right he is in a world of a novel he has read in his previous life), maybe he has already set his eyes on a few women?Last aspect I want to talk about is the villain aspect - Although MC seems not to hesitate to kill some men, he seems to have a soft spot for women - he never considers killing the heroines of the protagonists he is hunting, insetad, he only tries to charm them first. While it seems to make him seem less vile, I guess its up to author how to set his characteristics as he doesn't really have to be a merciless mass murderer in order to be a villain.I feel it's too soon to comment about the system setting, as too much info is lacking - we don't know the criterions that need to be met in order to kill a protagonist, we don't know how the lottery works (somehow he always gets 2 prizes every time insetad of one) and so on, I just assume author will reveal it through the story.Keep up the good work and good luck to the author, it's a great story!
  1. TheLocalGuyT2P
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    So, here is your author here but I will not just give a shameless review here. I will tell you all the good and the bad points of this novel.You can decide to read it or not after that. The good points:A calm MC: Lu Fei is mature, not brainless just because he's OP or something. He used to be a mercenary in a fantasy world, so he experienced the so called human nature there. He's not a guy who would blush talking to girls or hesitate to even insult them.The game: Ark is going to be one of the highlights of the novel as the whole novel is mostly based on it. NPCs would just like be regular people and the interaction between them and Lu Fei would be one of the highlights of the novel.Weak to strong: Lu Fei would not just become too OP from the start. He would struggle and even die sometimes but he would still be stronger than an average player.Romance: It's one of the points I am confident you will like. It's going to be sweet, like really sweet. There would be more than one girl liking him but I can't say about the harem.Characters: Characters would be unique and even some typical characters will have some unique points or a back story.Chapters: The chapters will be 2k in length, which is above average in WN terms.The bad points: The start: The first ten chapters can get annoying to some people as there would be some info dump and the game part will only start on the 6th chapter.Similar start: Many people will feel that the start is similar to other novels. A debt and a sister to take care of, but it will change as the story will progress.Plot holes: There would be some plot holes in the novel. I can't do anything about it as every novel have it.Not an OP MC: I know that VR novels in WN is filled with an OP MC who had come from the future and knows everything. This is bad point because most of the users look for an OP MC. I can't think of more bad points and it's up to the readers to decide in the end. I will advise the readers to read both bad and good reviews before reading the novel. Give a review, either positive or negative.I don't think there would be any problems with the grammar unless one is a grammar Nazi. I will end my words here.
  1. minajinhoo
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    It’s fun, but its 100% plot armor. I liked it but I can’t see myself reading more then 50 chapters of this book.................................
  1. Aman_Raut
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    I love it, the plot, the interactions, and the comedy are all much better than most of what webnovel has. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
  1. RighteousFilth
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