i like the concept on chapter 5 like Ko as a character as well it has potential i would say though some speaking bits is a bit confusing but that's pretty much it its a good novel keep it up
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It was good, but needs improvement .
The author can do better.
The story line is interesting, But needs more info about various things, as the readers may get confused, on what they're reading.
Some may know but mostly won't.
Anyways Good work!
Keep it up!
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It was good, but needs improvement .
The author can do better.
The story line is interesting, But needs more info about various things, as the readers may get confused, on what they're reading.
Some may know but mostly won't.
Anyways Good work!
Keep it up!