i think Qidian should add books after they have more than 10chapters just so we can review the novel..but anyway sypnosis looks great but im intriqued how did he know about cultivation inside the womb when he came from modern world
not bad but it gets boring fairly quick. The novel lacks the emotional pay off that can get me hooked on a novel. There's not enough conflict between the mc and other players. victory over other players is far more meaningfull than completing quest. No matter how many ss,sss or sss+ x ultra you add to a quest there is an implicit understanding that the mc will not fail. So there is little emotional reaction when they succeed.
So It seems I am starting a new novel. Of course like any other shameless author, I have to rate my novel a 5 star. This story takes place in a world of magic and monsters called Atinen. The mc of this story is a monster, he hatched inside of a dungeon like any other monster, yet, he is different. Read to find out why.
It's very nice. The story is truly unpredictable! I hope you'll update soon. I'm looking forward for a good ending. The originality can clearly be seen.
"You idiot! What are you doing?! Get out of my way!" Gan Ta yelled, pushing the guy off of him. the guy landed on his bum and froze up completely. Ai Yu always waited for the enemy to attack. Gan Ta swung the bat with his right hand to give it momentum as he took slow steps towards her. She saw right through him. He attacked with the bat using two hands before, so why was he using one now? His punch was directed towards her face, but she saw through this too. He was feigning it so that when she dodged, he would attack with the bat.
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