Journey to Discovery

Dumadagundong ang dibdib niya sa sobrang kaba pag-akyat sa ikalawang palapag. Akala niya ay hinihila lamang siya ni Paula roon para makisilip, ano pala ay doon din ang kanilang puwesto.

It a fine book not bad not great either. Though later in the book, there’s flash backs and time skips which for some reason aren’t specified when they happen. So it sometimes feels jarring when the Main character is at a place and the next second immediately some where else with no explanation of how they got there.

A bit early to give a review. As of now, I'm not sure where this story is heading. The MC is arrogant and very powerful with 1/10 strenght but at the same time, he seems to be the bottom? The first chapters are about an orphanage.

dear author why did you make the mc so frustrated but still a good novel i'm just very annoy on how you write the mc

The novel is great, but you have some writing mistakes so you should improve it, also the hero at least is not obsessed with harems and women and I wish you success