Journey into the Dark Universe

Writing style? It's a TEN, why? I like the way it was written in details. I'm not a fan of reading magical realism or anything that relates to fantasy but the author did a great job by letting the reader feel they are on scenes and I feel im one the scene. Keep writing

The synopsis is interesting and kind of made me question myself. The writing is superb and I like the pacing. Looking forward for this book~

Great plot so far. Have yet to finish the story but I know that I love it since I’m hooked on the story. ....<3 <3
Keep up the good job and I will always looking forward for the update

Hey there Author, keep up the good work. The novel is coming great and I know that you can make it even better. So dont lose hope and do your best!

The story is pretty well-knit, the characters were introduced appropriately while the author took his time to build the world. The plot is interesting to explore There are minor sentence structure mistakes, here and there otherwise it is a polished piece of work.
P.S. Author San could you work on the synopsis a little more, it would get you more readers that way.
So far, it is still good.[img=recommend]