So far, an interesting novel with nice lessons from the father character, as well as an interesting storyline. However, in the first chapter, there are too many commas in each sentence and many run-on sentences. It gets better after that chapter, but there are still many wrong tenses used, the characters don't really speak their age, and there's incorrect character quotation punctuations and capitalizations (ex- "back then, these were the days!." should become "Back then, those were the days!" To the author, I suggest researching a bit more on quotations by reading physical books in the english language).
But these are all pretty small things if you ignore them and just read the story. Pretty good overall, I would definitely keep reading if the author releases more chapters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next!
I'm surely going to recommend this book to those who come here to see the reviews. Let me tell you, the book is just start but it's need your help and in my opinion the book would get millions views!! Great work by Author! keep going !
I liked the story, it's very well written and the bonding between father and son is very nice, gave me a feeling of comfort, keep it up, waiting for more content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like the good representation of a single father. Wise words delving in the realm of discipline and morality. A finesse of pleasantness, harsh deceit, and just enough suspense. The mystery of dreams in a world where destiny and prophecy are common talk. Keep it up, I look forward to reading the rest of this tale.
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But these are all pretty small things if you ignore them and just read the story. Pretty good overall, I would definitely keep reading if the author releases more chapters. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see what happens next!