I’m at chapter 50, and for me, it was detailed, or should i say ’overly detailed’ to the point that even an unimportant scene could take up half a chapter or more… And because of how detailed it is, chapters are quite often being repeated from different perspective, or a particular topic for that matter.
All in all, I liked details in my stories, since those small details can really bring a story to life, but this novel add it a little TOO MUCH it felt quite repetitive and VERY slow-paced.
Not counting the complete lack of originality, It began with some hopeful details. But it quickly derailed in a cheesy melodrama with nonsense classic and overused webnovel plot devices.
tltr: Reading this is a waste of time.
the concept seemed nice but it's trash.
Alle the first 25/30 chapters (and i mean ALL) are only about how trash is the class of the mc. You are forced to hear the opinions of practically the entire school and their grandmas.
If you take away all the comments about how trash is the mc you probably won't have even 3 chapters worth of plot
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
woooowww..
people may say this novel is weak but it's got a whole different vibe..
the MC may be dumb and the author tries to write alot of useless things in the chapters to make them big but he drags the story.. the story is a good one
Well,it isn't neither good nor bad. Its in the acceptable range. The name of the system or the ability of it. As far as I know,there isn't any 100 fold or whatever,just unlimited evolution.
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All in all, I liked details in my stories, since those small details can really bring a story to life, but this novel add it a little TOO MUCH it felt quite repetitive and VERY slow-paced.
tltr: Reading this is a waste of time.
Alle the first 25/30 chapters (and i mean ALL) are only about how trash is the class of the mc. You are forced to hear the opinions of practically the entire school and their grandmas.
If you take away all the comments about how trash is the mc you probably won't have even 3 chapters worth of plot
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
gawd the peanut gallery is strong in here
fat friend ✓
once orphan, now has a family ✓
the will to 'save' people ✓
the book is good but god bless my soul the peanut gallery is infuriating and annoying
people may say this novel is weak but it's got a whole different vibe..
the MC may be dumb and the author tries to write alot of useless things in the chapters to make them big but he drags the story.. the story is a good one
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