Really can't figure out how such a promising plot can be screwed up so badly... I was so excited in the beginning when his cheat was revealed, and thought, worst case, it'll be a standard xianxia plot. Never could I imagine that the MC would be characterized so badly. Playing around with lolis, random fights that seem like they've been written on a whim, unnecessary conflicts because MC acts like it's beneath him to explain circumstances properly. Especially chapters 365-370, why couldn't he just show the dean how he modifies a technique by requesting one that's not in the library and doing it on the spot. Instead, the author just had to escalate this to another meaningless conflict.Sincerely request the author to improve the novel while they can. Try and take reference from the ones that succeeded with similar cheats (Warlock of the Magus World kind of novels). Just a suggestion from my part.
Great VR MMORPG novel to read... the story goes on flow, but the characters are few... it has a suspenseful backstory to wait for the upcoming chapters...
In the first chapter or so, there is a slight turn off with MC propaganda. I stuck it out until chapter 10 and discovered that the story picks up. However, our MC is slightly crazy and is a supposed genius. I feel that lowered character development, but the story in itself is interesting with a player system but with the players being akin to the supernatural. It's a pretty good read, but with some face palming moments.
He hadn't felt it with his body, but the view from a flying bird's eye was pretty impressive. He had also confirmed one more thing, the bird could see perfectly in the dark.
As Tyler saw his current situation wasn't good, he started sweating a little, but recovered quickly. He activated his tainted tenseigan eyes and saw the death lines of his enemies. He decided to trap them in his new mindscape reality marble in order to prevent them from running away. A chant seemed to magically pop into his mind;
"You are right. What we have done was something that needed to be done no matter what. The Sacred family was far too corrupted to be saved. But still even so..."
Popular Reviews