writing quality got worse after locked chapters, felt cheated of my time. sometimes it's just mumbo jumbo sentences that you don't understand appear here and there.other than that, it's okay.Can't recommend to someone who want to invest their time on this novel
The thought of him being a Playboy then made him reincarnate as a monkey was hilarious.haha 😂. You do know how to be a comedian with this one. I can see this is a half finished novel as I can still see that it still needs editing. Still, it didn't bothered me to read the story. I hope you release more in the future. 👍
Translation quality: terrible. The translation quality up to chapter 40 is good, but after that it’s like a switch was flipped and now it’s closer to poorly edited MTL. At this point, the translation is so literal that it’s difficult to follow. 2/5Updating stability: solid. Even though the updates are bad, at least they’re regular. That said, they immediately released 25 chapters into their privilege tier so it could obviously be better. 4/5Story development: mixed. The cases are interesting, but outside of them the story is too bland. Everything goes right for the MC and he’s never challenged or in conflict with anything else. And while it doesn’t particularly bother me, the “China STRONK” nationalism is particularly fierce in this one. 3/5Character design: lackluster. While the criminals are interesting and there’s some gray to the morality, the characters we spend the most time with are bland and uninteresting. The romance is the same: bland. It’s also rushed and the characters involved are too perfect. 2/5World background: uninspired. Normally, I find the nationalism inherent in Chinese novels intriguing, because their take on foreign countries as filtered through the state media and Great Firewall gives a unique perspective on the author’s culture, but here it actually hurts them. The MC transmigrated to a world where nothing is different, except that China is as powerful there as the US is in reality. Other than that, there is no difference from the day-to-day that we already live with so the worldbuilding is something the author just skipped. 2/5Overall: I’m dropping this at chapter 90-something because of the tl quality more than anything else. While the cases are indeed interesting, there’s just not enough there to justify straining to read the terrible translation.
I like the idea. I dislike the execution. The story is extremely bland. There's no soul to it at all. The MC has bs background but he doesn't use it nearly as much as he should. The system is bogus, like seriously, why would he spend points on cultivation/martial techniques she should have already known/mastered in his past life? That's just stupid.
it is a great novel but the author I appreciate it if you change the name of the novel because people might be confused because this name novel existed with the same concept but the mc name I think it's Chen mo and he rebirth in the world where video games, not hifi like ours so he started his company made game himself without any help game designer or anyone else then he start collecting girls. so yeah I appreciate it if you rename your novel
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